The August writing topics were:
- Everyone stopped their activities and watched…
- When he’d hung up the phone…
- Telephone calls were invariably answered by…
As usual we enjoyed a varied range of stories and pictures created using words.
At our class in July, we spent some time talking about the sense of smell, and some of the class wove smells into their stories for the August class – well done. This helps to create a picture of the scenes. For example, one of the stories was set in a hospital, with including the smell of the disinfectant helping to create the feel of the environment. Another was set in the bed sitter of an old man, describing the “acrid smell of smoke and burning tobacco … the heavy stale stench of alcohol accompanied by a lingering suggestion of body odour”. With descriptions like this we can see and experience the room. This is what it means to create pictures with words.
Once again, without any collaboration, two class members wrote about a similar topic – children experiencing the circus coming to town.
The topics for our September class are:
- She had just two choices. She could forget all about it and move on, or …
- I have a friend who says she is the only person in town who …
- They walked down the drive and across the road
With restrictions once again reduced, we will hopefully meet up for our next class on 13 September.
Joy Shirley